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LunarDesigns says

What do you thing guys ? is it good ? will it be approved ? Share your opinions :)

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ToivoMedia says

My thoughts – the legibility on the strawberry one could be improved. I don’t think the title where you’ve mixed the styles on each word looks very good. Too much contrast between the dark and light styles, doesn’t make it very readable. Honey could have more shine and reflection on it. My guess is it will be soft rejected, but that’s just a guess! Quite cool styles anyway. :)

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LunarDesigns says

My thoughts – the legibility on the strawberry one could be improved. I don’t think the title where you’ve mixed the styles on each word looks very good. Too much contrast between the dark and light styles, doesn’t make it very readable. Honey could have more shine and reflection on it. My guess is it will be soft rejected, but that’s just a guess! Quite cool styles anyway. :)
Thanks you very much , and I will definitely make these changes to them .
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mihaimcm says

Add more shine to the gold text style ,they are mediocre in my opinion ,try to do something with the bg to make the text stand out more (patterns or shadows or different objects …) and yeah chose some different fonts , add additional effects to the styles ,using effects from others tutorials and sell them is not permitted ,hope that helps.

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LunarDesigns says

My thoughts – the legibility on the strawberry one could be improved. I don’t think the title where you’ve mixed the styles on each word looks very good. Too much contrast between the dark and light styles, doesn’t make it very readable. Honey could have more shine and reflection on it. My guess is it will be soft rejected, but that’s just a guess! Quite cool styles anyway. :)
Can you suggest some backgrounds to use behind the text ?
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LunarDesigns says

My thoughts – the legibility on the strawberry one could be improved. I don’t think the title where you’ve mixed the styles on each word looks very good. Too much contrast between the dark and light styles, doesn’t make it very readable. Honey could have more shine and reflection on it. My guess is it will be soft rejected, but that’s just a guess! Quite cool styles anyway. :)

I have changed them just like what you said and they have been approved :D , check them out .

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