Revision 2 Rejected. Anyone got ideas for me?

I believe you should create logo that is more customizable. I will suggest having the illustration either on the top of the text or on the side of the text. This is because the company that buy this logo will probably not use ‘seo rehab’ as the word and it is kinda hard to achieve what you have with different wordings.

I also believe a logo to be a simplified version and not really an illustration but this is just my 2c though.

For submission, I will suggest to try come out with different variation to use the logo and a black and white version.

You need to find a better font to use. The one you are using right now is not going to cut it.

The illustration is much better then the previous version.

Cheers, I’ll take it onboard and try again. I chose the font as I thought it matched the cable going from the mouse to the Stethoscope.

It’s a pity they don’t highlight what exactly’s wrong with it. For all I know I could be taking away what they like and making it worse in the reviewers eyes?

glenngoh said
For submission, I will suggest to try come out with different variation to use the logo and a black and white version.

Sorry I should have posted the submission variations too

I’ve taken onboard the suggestions, how about this for a revision?

I think something is not working with your link, I only get a Flickr error message.

Cheers

Chris

Whoops, here it is again:

P.S. It would be useful if you could edit your old posts in this forum.

You can edit your posts, but you can only do it for a few minutes after you posted…

Personally I’m still not too keen on the font. I see that this different, but it doesn’t really do anything for me.

Also the graphic work and the text don’t align properly. I would either centre it or make them the same height.

To me it doesn’t look enough like one unit. Words are too separated, alignment isn’t right, balance is a bit off.

I do like the idea. I’m just not 100% convinced of the execution.

But then that’s just my personal opinion. Don’t take this by any means as professional advice. I’m not a logo design ninja by any means!

Cheers

Chris

Ok here are some that are aligned center and with a font change.