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simonswiss says

Im in the process of uploading my 2nd logo. It’s a pretty simple logo made of a coffee cup and a text bubble coming out of it as if it was vapors of the coffee..

Here it is – i know my item presentation design is not optimal, i need to step my game up in this department..

I’d appreciate if you can give me your feedback on the logo! :-)

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Amrhamza says

well if you can make it represent a cyber-cafe , then it will make lot of sense.

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ShermanJackson says

Looks like two separate elements to me. It’s pretty basic. Make the concept a “clever” concept.

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anchor_point_heshan says

Yes the styling of the presentation does not seems much good…... specially the gradient one is odd….. pretty creative logo idea…... seems it’s better to change the shape of the cup also… it looks a bit similar to a mug….. Consider typography, I think and it’s much better to align the call out to come to the top of the cup I meant a bit righter…... any way tried to help you a bit.. Im not a pro just a beginner…...

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simonswiss says

Thanks guys for your feedback, always useful!

@anchor_point it is suppost to look like a mug. I do agree with the aligning of the text – if the file is rejected i will make this fix.

Thanks again!

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anchor_point_heshan says

oh… Im sorry I thought you have made it like a cup .. Im sorry about that…......... but it looks really a mug then.. but there would be a question in me whether there would be a tradition of serving coffee in a mug rather than in a cup ?..... Im not sure… but I think this should be really a creative idea and should be approved

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simonswiss says

Starbucks?

Hey, no need to be sorry mate you came up with very good points!

Or do you mean it looks like a beer mug? :-)

Ok Starbuck’s coffee mug is higher than wide and mine here is a bit square-ish, but it is because i wanted to avoid the logo to become too vertical.. right now it fits nicely on even proportions (see 80×80 thumbnail when/if it gets approved).

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simonswiss says

Item was soft rejected due to the poor preview design.

I have changed the preview file to the following, and aligned to the text to the cup and bubble – thanks again for your feedback.

Here’s the new file:

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simonswiss says

Yay got approved this time! :-)

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simonswiss says

First sale, yay! :-) For an item in the logo section, it’s pretty good, considering the low volume of sales of this category. I’m happy!

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