Site Template rejected

Hi

I submitted my first Site Template which was rejected. No Problem at all, but unfortunately the Summary of what´s wron gi s a little General. Could someone please give me a little Feedback? I´ll appreciate a Lot.

Here´s the Link:

TemplateLink

Thank You

Review:

Homepage

• Those lines look weird
  
• The Semi-Transparent Button needs some rework

Features

• The Typography needs rework. Try to choose a different typeface (font) and make use of appropriate line-heights. At the moment it looks to crowded.
• The Links are looking to “standard”. You should style them a bit more
• The Images should have a hover effect. Not only the border but instead something like fadein/fadeout with a zoom-icon would be nice
• Also you should put different images in your demo, not 4-times the same. And YES this is also important because in the end it is a “product” and not anything free, or am I wrong?

Features

• I don’t need a screenshot to tell you that the typography looks like anything but not a good choice. Rework it.

Contact

• As you can see the textarea for the embed code is messed up. This needs to be fixed.

• The Form Fields are to small in terms of “height”. Looks like something is wrong. It also doesn’t align very well with the button aside.
• The Button is not only too close at the textarea. It literally sticks to it. No Space to breathe. Give em a break.
• The Contact Details on the right doesn’t look like anything. When I look at it I only see some letters. If I wouldn’t be in that business I wouldn’t know what this box should be. Try to bring icons in the game. Find a nice looking glyphicon-set and implement it. Pictures are saying more than 1000 words. And use “real sample” contact infos, like Amaretto Street 66, 100500 Moonlight City, +20 12 10 11 15 15. And keep an eye on spacing and “grouping”. Adress Info together, Phone and E-Mail together.

Summary

Sidenotes: I’ve viewed your template in Chrome v22, Win7×64 with a resolution of 1920×955

Happy enhancing/reworking and good luck

PS: I’ll send you the bill for that review later PPS : Next time please follow the forum rules and post your feedback request in ‘item disussion’

Hi Infusion01

First of all, thank You for your Reply. I´ll try to improve on all the Points you listed, so hopefully my Template will be accepted:)

Sorry, Infuse01 of Course

did you checked this with all browsers? IE9 seems not to know what this is all about..nothing is in place, nothing works. regards.

Hi dzerhio

Yes, something definitely went wrong :-/ At the Moment i am re-shaping it in almost every Part, so we´ll see how it ´ll end up ..