So – I guess I need to add more nudity? Feedback helpful.

Clean, simple, minimal design — built in InDesgin (which GR says they want more files in InDesign…)

Also, why is “doesn’t meet current technical requirements” a euphemism for “We don’t like it”?

Hi! Are you try to sell this like a flyer or like a broshure, ... ?

Btw. design is good for me.

Yeah, it’s a flyer.

@harmonikas996, like your stuff, so thanks, appreciated.

To simple or there are already other files like this one…Try to create some depth with the text make the main titles a little bit bigger …that is what I will try to change Hope u get it approved

ctsgraphics said
Yeah, it’s a flyer. @harmonikas996, like your stuff, so thanks, appreciated.

Thank you. You are great too.

try to create another 3-4 pages and sell like a magazine pages.

I was thinking that is magazine, not flyer.

@harmonikas996 thanks. Yeah, actually this was a page from a booklet — and I realized that the problem is it probably doesn’t work on it’s own, event tho it works as a booklet page. Might as well just submit the whole booklet!

ctsgraphics said
@harmonikas996 thanks. Yeah, actually this was a page from a booklet — and I realized that the problem is it probably doesn’t work on it’s own, event tho it works as a booklet page. Might as well just submit the whole booklet!

No probs, I am here to help you.

make one or two more pages with simillar content and design and sell like a booklet.

I see some problems in the typography, and less the overall design seems a BIT basic…... Please wait and see other’s replies… just a try to help you

I don’t do any design work or illustration, but I do purchase and have jobs often. I agree with the comment it’s very basic. A few pictures on a white background with a logo and text is a plain as vanilla ice cream.

I would use some type of neutral background color to frame the brochure and then put a white border around the pictures to make them come forward. The logo should be a lot bigger and you should consider putting some type of edging around the whole thing. You can also angle the text on one corner so it looks like a page opening.

Bottom line is anyone can put a few pics on a white background and add text in Word you need to elevate your style and design beyond that.