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ioL
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Hello Evryone can some one help me with a soft reject ?

Reason: You need to work over the hierarchy of this item a little here to give it a little more sophistication. The preview image set here is still incorrectly labelled. They should be labelled as such: xx_aname.jpg where xx is a leading double digit number starting at 01. These should typically be within 900×900 pixels.

Flyer http://imgur.com/OCeSGza
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mihaimcm
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Roling stones the ….pink floyd ,that text try to change it make some depth by placing some smaller text in that zone ,your flyer looks good ,in my opinion if you put some smaller text in that zone it will be accepted. :D

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ioL
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Roling stones the ….pink floyd ,that text try to change it make some depth by placing some smaller text in that zone ,your flyer looks good ,in my opinion if you put some smaller text in that zone it will be accepted. :D
thank you very much for ur reply :) i will try it ty
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gbs
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As reviewer said, I think the issue is the text hierarchy. You should make the headline bigger and more attractive than the other text elements in the design, to get the first impression of viewer :)

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unlockedart
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Make the “your club” text on the top a bit bigger and make it pop. This is the clubs name, their brand, this I would think should pop a bit more. Overall though great flyer. Really like it, keep up the good work.

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ioL
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As reviewer said, I think the issue is the text hierarchy. You should make the headline bigger and more attractive than the other text elements in the design, to get the first impression of viewer :)

Thanks for reply :) and ur opinion

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ioL
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Make the “your club” text on the top a bit bigger and make it pop. This is the clubs name, their brand, this I would think should pop a bit more. Overall though great flyer. Really like it, keep up the good work.

thank you very much :)

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ioL
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Flyer accept it thank you all :)

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