Soft reject - Need feedbacks & advices

Hey guys ! I just need some advices and your point of wiew about my second template.

You can check the demo here: http://huso-o.com/demo/profeel

Reason: Above the fold is nice, but there is problem with the readability. The content for each sections are generic, especially the resume. Super tiny font size doesn’t give you good minimal design. You need to make sure of good white space to get the best out of it.

hey , reviewer said , ur layout its generic and some parts of the text are hard to read , try to improve the size or contrats on typography ..

Thanks for the answer, but what is meaning “generic” ? I checked the translator, but i really don’t get it… Apologize for my bad enlish.

Generic means not unique, if everyone did the same think it’d be generic

Okay great, thank you BenSheppard : )

très beau

Salut !

Il’y a de l’idée ! Juste: la fille fait peur….et la police manque de travail et n’est pas belle. Ensuite, oui c’est un peu trop simple, manque d’originalité. Voilà juste quelques conseils

J’espère t’avoir aidé

Bonne journée,

F²

Merci à tout les deux, je vais voir ce que je peux faire : )