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hawkmax says

You need to work on the typeface pairing of the item here somewhat. Consider the general look and feel as it looks that little bit generic and the combination of fonts doesn’t quite gel together.

Take a look over the following link for a little help:

http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/typography-articles/a-beginners-guide-to-pairing-fonts/ Take a look at these links for info on visual hierarchy, pairing fonts together and typography tips. http://designjunction.in/blog/2009/08/31/visual-hierarchy-and-typography/ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/typography-articles/a-beginners-guide-to-pairing-fonts/ http://psd.tutsplus.com/articles/techniques/a-20-minute-intro-to-typography-basics/

After making the required fixes or improvements, please edit your submission at http://graphicriver.net/item/open-house-flyer/edit/4672693 and submit for re-review.

Open for Suggestion… Should I just change the fonts or any ideas for placement ?

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hueyangdesigns says

I like the fonts but I see what they are saying. The font pairings are “too cool” for the type of advertising your doing. Example: \\ You need to consider the market audience (age, etc. etc.)

Good luck tho :D

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hueyangdesigns says

I also wonder if maybe there could be more to the design than just a background of a picture of a house.

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