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gioska
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My item has been soft rejected. The reason: Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements. It needs improvements in the styles it offers and general visual hierarchy. Light text on a light background causes poor contrast and results in uncomfortable to read text.

http://www.uddu.it/greened/landing.html Please help me for improvements. THANK YOU.

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2Fwebd
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Hi Gioska ! Good job ! I like it :) The main issue is the readability of your text: http://d.pr/i/xXFM (same problem in the contact area). Tweets slider goes too fast :P
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,

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Thanks a lot doublef, This Help me :)

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2Fwebd
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Cool ;) Hope you’ll be accepted !

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I like it. I think the map is not so eye catchy but hey it’s an interesting concept. Also the headings / paragraphs need more contrast as size is just not enough to lead.

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Thank dnp_theme.

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Again soft rejected…now the problem is: “There are a few inconsistent spacing issues throughout the design”

Please need help.

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Yes, naturally..

Well, the “Stay Tuned! We are currently working on a awesome new site.” block is not equally distanced, as well as the green text line “Five coffees a day a bit of code and we will be online!”.

Same on page “A SHORT BIO”. Your typo must be conceptual and not chaotic.

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Thanks, you think for the bio header someone how “our biography”? You can see other inconsistent spacing issues?

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Yes man, you need to work on those spacings… from your first page.. it’s just not polished good enough. Look at my items, they all have consistent spacing (heading + text block = good micro-spacing, then content body have same margin above and below and this is macro-spacing).

All these spacings are measured, I personally use a calculator for line-height and margin. I use no padding except for buttons or other graphics. Again, see on my items to learn the technique.

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