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gioska says

My item has been soft rejected. The reason: Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements. It needs improvements in the styles it offers and general visual hierarchy. Light text on a light background causes poor contrast and results in uncomfortable to read text.

http://www.uddu.it/greened/landing.html Please help me for improvements. THANK YOU.

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2Fwebd says

Hi Gioska ! Good job ! I like it :) The main issue is the readability of your text: http://d.pr/i/xXFM (same problem in the contact area). Tweets slider goes too fast :P
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,

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gioska says

Thanks a lot doublef, This Help me :)

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2Fwebd says

Cool ;) Hope you’ll be accepted !

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dnp_theme says

I like it. I think the map is not so eye catchy but hey it’s an interesting concept. Also the headings / paragraphs need more contrast as size is just not enough to lead.

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gioska says

Thank dnp_theme.

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gioska says

Again soft rejected…now the problem is: “There are a few inconsistent spacing issues throughout the design”

Please need help.

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dnp_theme says

Yes, naturally..

Well, the “Stay Tuned! We are currently working on a awesome new site.” block is not equally distanced, as well as the green text line “Five coffees a day a bit of code and we will be online!”.

Same on page “A SHORT BIO”. Your typo must be conceptual and not chaotic.

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gioska says

Thanks, you think for the bio header someone how “our biography”? You can see other inconsistent spacing issues?

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dnp_theme says

Yes man, you need to work on those spacings… from your first page.. it’s just not polished good enough. Look at my items, they all have consistent spacing (heading + text block = good micro-spacing, then content body have same margin above and below and this is macro-spacing).

All these spacings are measured, I personally use a calculator for line-height and margin. I use no padding except for buttons or other graphics. Again, see on my items to learn the technique.

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