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dubsbhoy
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Soft reject on a flyer, I’m a little confused on the feedback if anyone has any advice i’d appreciate it.

“You need to work over the styling a little here, the file looks interesting but in places the hierarchy could be tweaked to give that extra little sophistication and refinement.”

Thanks in advance

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PharaohsPixels
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Things I would do :

1.Remove either the disco balls or the speakers , the two overlapping are not looking good .

2.Work on the upper white text , it looks so plain .

3.The details text not the main one is abit unreadable , work on it more .

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dubsbhoy
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Things I would do :

1.Remove either the disco balls or the speakers , the two overlapping are not looking good .

2.Work on the upper white text , it looks so plain .

3.The details text not the main one is abit unreadable , work on it more .

Makes sense, thanks for the reply

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PharaohsPixels
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Things I would do :

1.Remove either the disco balls or the speakers , the two overlapping are not looking good .

2.Work on the upper white text , it looks so plain .

3.The details text not the main one is abit unreadable , work on it more .
Makes sense, thanks for the reply

No problem , I hope it gets approved

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dubsbhoy
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Things I would do :

1.Remove either the disco balls or the speakers , the two overlapping are not looking good .

2.Work on the upper white text , it looks so plain .

3.The details text not the main one is abit unreadable , work on it more .
Makes sense, thanks for the reply
No problem , I hope it gets approved

Just got approved – thanks for your help mate

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PharaohsPixels
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Things I would do :

1.Remove either the disco balls or the speakers , the two overlapping are not looking good .

2.Work on the upper white text , it looks so plain .

3.The details text not the main one is abit unreadable , work on it more .
Makes sense, thanks for the reply
No problem , I hope it gets approved
Just got approved – thanks for your help mate

No problem , I am glad I helped you

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