Like with your other one, I think the concept and basic layout are quite good. But the typography is too simple and needs to be improved.
Simple typography…Agree with Toivo. The bottom text just fades into the background and is lost. Overal concept of your flyer is really good just work on the text.
Thank you very much guys! I’ve made some improvement. Can you please tell me if the typography is better? Can i submit it, or do you still think that more change must be done?http://s1295.photobucket.com/user/Lionel_Laboureur/media/reach-for-the-Moon-Flyer_zps4ada6b92.png.html?sort=3&o=0
The large title looks better, but I don’t think the small text is too good. I don’t think the heavy shadow on the bottom text looks that good.
Thanks Toivo for answering that fast and your precious advices. You’re helping me a lot. Do you mean all the small text or just the “& her orchestra” , which one i recognized i ‘ve been playing around for quite some time without real satisfaction . Im out of ideas for this one. i’ll come back later with a fresh head.
Yes I think all the small text has problems. Also the font you’ve used for most of it, I’ve seen used a lot for flyers. So there is a danger that it will not be considered unique enough for the marketplace. Also yes the & her orchestra text doesn’t fit very well at the moment.
Hi again, So, here is the latest version. Hopefully, it got better. What do you think?http://s1295.photobucket.com/user/Lionel_Laboureur/media/la-diva-moon-A4_zpsaf492266.png.html?sort=3&o=0
I again did other improvements. I think i’m quite happy with it. Is there anything else i can do?http://s1295.photobucket.com/user/Lionel_Laboureur/media/la-diva-moon-A4_zps5caf2c33.png.html?sort=3&o=0