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thomask3r says

I could really need some help on this flyer. What do you think, and what can be improved? I feel like all the elements are there, but it’s still simple..

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UnknownDepths says

thomask3r,

I kind of like what you’ve got going here. The font you are using is a condensed font; it looks like you are using it with a certain point of kerning. I wonder what the font looks with its default kerning (if this isn’t its default).

I would say adding two things could improve the look of it.

1. A black to transparent gradient from the bottom up, ending at the bottom of the lower text area (or right underneath “First Drink Free.”

2. The inclusion of all white social media icons just above the website address? Perhaps distanced closely together to keep the feel of the condensed font you are using?

The black gradient will help make the website address and social media icons clearly visible. You may even want to play with bordering the entire image with some kind of black gradient border? Or a dark sepia gradient?

I’m also thinking those lens flares you’ve got going on are nice. Perhaps highlighting 2-4 more areas of text with them could work well?

And a question for you… Everything is centered except for the “My Events Presents.” Any particular reason this isn’t centered as well?

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thomask3r says

Thank you very much for replying :) I’ll try your suggestions, and see if it gets better.

I’ve played with the tracking for the characters, so the spaces between is bigger on some of the text, and smaller on some of it.

Thanks again!

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