Some suggestions pls

Hello everyone, i started drawing my new template in psd and i would like to have some suggestions before i finish drawing and start coding it

here is the demo :

DEMO

gokhan214 said
i would like to have some suggestions before i finish drawing and start coding it

delete. start from scratch.

can you tell me what made you delete please? suggestion = targeting what s missed what is good and what s not

This is a million miles away from the standard required to get approval on Themeforest. Spend a lot of time browsing the best selling themes to get an understanding of what’s required.

guys i wasnt asking about how design looks, i am asking to tell me what issues there are,

e.g. typography, colors, e.t.c.

first of all this is only an image, this is a psd uploaded, no animations nothing there, what i have in my mind isnt in your mind, do you have any ideas about how the site will load what the menu will animate like, what the slider is going to be like? do not judge the design, i was asking about typography, colors and such things, same design isnt good for everyone and that s why there millions of different designs on themeforest

Menu items too small

Everything’s too grey and faded – nothing stands out

The ‘Look Now’ banner – kill that font, kill it with fire.

The dual blue/grey colouring of the titles doesn’t work.

Try not to use stock images of happy smiley office people – they are overused and clichéd.

RubenBristian said

gokhan214 said
i would like to have some suggestions before i finish drawing and start coding it

delete. start from scratch.

what a comment is this? start from scratch, what you are viewing is allready a scratch by the way it is not coded, did you read before you sent a post?

kops said
Menu items too small

Everything’s too grey and faded – nothing stands out

The ‘Look Now’ banner – kill that font, kill it with fire.

The dual blue/grey colouring of the titles doesn’t work.

Try not to use stock images of happy smiley office people – they are overused and clichéd.

thanks bro, finally somebody who can comment

Sorry it’s a double message.