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xstortionist says

Looking to get some feedback here. This is a children’s sunblock logo called “Sun Lion”

Thanks!

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WonderArt says

Nice idea.. but it will look more better i think if the lion look more funny and text too.

try to use another color scheme that close to yellow .. or use dark color( brown ) in the “Mane” from face…it will look good…. try it… u good going.. keep it up… :)

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xstortionist says
WonderArt said
Nice idea.. but it will look more better i think if the lion look more funny and text too. try to use another color scheme that close to yellow .. or use dark color( brown ) in the “Mane” from face…it will look good…. try it… u good going.. keep it up… :)

Oh wow, the mane being dark brown like in the letters LION looks really good. Didn’t even think about that.

I’ll post an update soon.

Any ideas on how to make him funny? Maybe his eyes closed will give him a funner look?

Also, you have any ideas for a funner font? I’m struggling here with the font. Went on a few sites and just couldn’t find anything that I thought was really fun. Help would greatly be appreciated.

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Teba says

Nice Concept..But if you change the color scheme, it will looks better.Use a bit active colors :) Good Luck , mate ;)

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xstortionist says

Thank you all for the excellent feedback.

I’ve updated the color scheme. I think it looks much better with the darker color main. I also updated the other colors as well.

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WonderArt says

It really looking better… You can try other color scheme (something more close to yellow)..

change the eye color … make it white to black… and give it like he smiling..

you can google it. for find an idea… The font is okay but looking thin .. if you can bold it it will look more better.. and the dots… reduce its size…

search in dafont for funny fonts… best of luck :)

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