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ReaxionGraphics says

You might have too much space above and below your slider… maybe tighten it up a bit? I’d also add more style to the slider… darker and slightly bigger drop shadow? I’ll let you figure that out, but see if you can jazz it up!

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JeffOakley says

Hi everyone.. Many thanks for all the constructive feedback so far..i did try again to upload today, and sadly it got rejected.. Never mind though,i’m still going to work on it..i dont want to stop on this template.. I would really appreciate your thoughts on it’s current state, and what i still need to improve on.. I feel the colour scheme is ok now,and i’ve worked a lot on the overall design.. Do you think it needs more features?..any advice on these?

Many thanks for your time and any feedback you’d be kind enough to leave… Thanks Jeff

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Luke86 says

OK I am not a designer but I will tell you what would stop me buying this.

1) The arrow in the menu look out of place. 2) Distance between the top of the slider and the black menu bar needs reducing. 3) The buttons for the scroller don’t show a mouse icon when hovering them. 4) shadow-normal.png – make it stretch across the page, it looks clumped up (hope you get what I mean). 5) The image next to your Welcome paragraph is too big.

http://moradxd.zxq.net/?theme=Special – look at how the text is positioned and layed out on this design.

Hope this helps you :)

Luke86

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JeffOakley says
Luke86 said
OK I am not a designer but I will tell you what would stop me buying this.

1) The arrow in the menu look out of place. 2) Distance between the top of the slider and the black menu bar needs reducing. 3) The buttons for the scroller don’t show a mouse icon when hovering them. 4) shadow-normal.png – make it stretch across the page, it looks clumped up (hope you get what I mean). 5) The image next to your Welcome paragraph is too big.

http://moradxd.zxq.net/?theme=Special – look at how the text is positioned and layed out on this design.

Hope this helps you :)

Luke86

great tips…many thanks

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