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here the link http://www.pixelgaza.com/sinscity

the reviewr said

Unfortunately your submission Sin City isn’t quite ready for ThemeForest and requires significant improvements

what i do now to improve that

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Hi, this theme isn’t ready for a long shot m8.

  1. The language?
  2. The slider keep on spinning
  3. Typography
  4. There’s no content?
  5. Contrast
  6. Header is to dull/grey
  7. Sorry but this theme is just really bad my friend and not ready to be sold on themeforest and i doubt it will be accepted once you made some improvements. There are just to many thing wrong with this theme.
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I Wow your WOW.

You need to improve your taste. It’s clear that you don’t “see”

by that I mean that you haven’t spent enough time studying web design principles or design principles.

Don’t stop improving your skills in WP, HTML & CSS but in addition to that

you have to start learning design! Beginning with the very very very BASICS!

http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/sessions/web-design-theory/

also take a look around the web and check some web design showcase sites so you see “what’s going on” and also other TF authors works.

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lol, you already have item in themeforest and in Graphics River and you asking why this template not approved: http://www.pixelgaza.com/sinscity

What a hillarious Joke, @wptitans well said there is many problem that required to fill + Missing creativity.

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Hi, this theme isn’t ready for a long shot m8.
  1. The language?
  2. The slider keep on spinning
  3. Typography
  4. There’s no content?
  5. Contrast
  6. Header is to dull/grey
  7. Sorry but this theme is just really bad my friend and not ready to be sold on themeforest and i doubt it will be accepted once you made some improvements. There are just to many thing wrong with this theme.

sorry the URL is wrong the this is the true URL

http://www.pixelgaza.com/sincity
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lol, you already have item in themeforest and in Graphics River and you asking why this template not approved: http://www.pixelgaza.com/sinscity What a hillarious Joke, @wptitans well said there is many problem that required to fill + Missing creativity.
sorry the URL is wrong the this is the true URL http://www.pixelgaza.com/sincity
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I Wow your WOW.

You need to improve your taste. It’s clear that you don’t “see”

by that I mean that you haven’t spent enough time studying web design principles or design principles.

Don’t stop improving your skills in WP, HTML & CSS but in addition to that

you have to start learning design! Beginning with the very very very BASICS!

http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/sessions/web-design-theory/ also take a look around the web and check some web design showcase sites so you see “what’s going on” and also other TF authors works.
sorry the URL is wrong the previous URL it is extra letter is the true URL http://www.pixelgaza.com/sincity
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Hi, this theme isn’t ready for a long shot m8.
  1. The language?
  2. The slider keep on spinning
  3. Typography
  4. There’s no content?
  5. Contrast
  6. Header is to dull/grey
  7. Sorry but this theme is just really bad my friend and not ready to be sold on themeforest and i doubt it will be accepted once you made some improvements. There are just to many thing wrong with this theme.

sorry the URL is wrong the previous URL it is extra letter is the true URL http://www.pixelgaza.com/sincity

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haha it’s ok.

At least now you know what kind of feedback you get when you show us something like that.

as for the coming soon page, the only thing i would keep is the blurred images for the bg.

look at the input field, left and right padding is different, only top and bottom matches. subscribe button and input field distance is again a different value.

there is no vertical alignment expect the title and the “we are under” everything else looks kike it was thrown in randomly.

the Sin City logotype looks also weak.

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Now you espect positive feedback from me :D, Well your images transitions is clutered on first time -page load each images are showing that they not completely loaded in browser so the first impression is breaking down.

Make your first impression as perfect to till end.

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