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OTallu says

Hi,

Template is rejected and reason is: “The overall quality of your submission does not meet our aesthetic and technical requirements”

Please take a look at this design. do you think it was not good for Themeforest? Please review .

Coming Soon Template

Thanks Talal

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sheko_elanteko says

I like it, but that’s just my opinion.
I know it’s frustrating, believe me I do, but you need to change the “What’s wrong with my design” to “How can I improve my design”, and eventually you gonna get approved.

Cheers.

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OTallu says

Thanks sheko_elanteko , Actually i submitted it 3rd time with improvements… and i agree that previous submissions was really not good but this time i was sure enough that i will be accepted…

But Still Needs to improve? Any Suggestions please?

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aleluja says

I like it a lot. Tho the visual hierarchy is messed up, so it looks kinda messed up.

Read understanding visual hierarchy in web design article and understand it, and you shall see your design with different eyes :)

edit: I really really like it.

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edumicro says

Btw, change the name of your theme as it means “Dick” in Portuguese. Talking serious.

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aleluja says

Btw, change the name of your theme as it means “Dick” in Portuguese. Talking serious.

lol

One more thing, after finishing the article I linked in previous post, be sure to do the test at the end of the article. It’s awesome. And will help you a lot with improving.

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OTallu says

lol i didn’t know that :D will change that…

And Thanks aleluja

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FRESHFACE says

It also should have more rounded corners to go with those 2.0 gradients :)

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aleluja says

and button is not clicable

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2AA says

however it’s great start here the themeforest stuff and people always looking for clean layout

Try to use the grayscale colors “from black to white “

make the buttons easily creator and use the css3 effects like gradient and shadow

and don’t use img in your design …

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