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BenSheppard says

I’d love to hear your feedback on my template http://ohlookawebsite.com/comingsoon/

What needs to be changed, what doesn’t look good, etc.

Thanks!

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doubleF says
Hi guy!
Good concept but few points need improvements.
  • You have a problem with the spacing, some elements are not well centered (”#aboutbox”)
  • Buttons lacks work they are too small use bootstrap (add icons into your buttons)
  • In the navigation area, area is not centered with the over text effect
  • Progress bar lacks work too
Hope I helped you :)
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BenSheppard says

Hi guy!
Good concept but few points need improvements.
  • You have a problem with the spacing, some elements are not well centered (”#aboutbox”)
  • Buttons lacks work they are too small use bootstrap (add icons into your buttons)
  • In the navigation area, area is not centered with the over text effect
  • Progress bar lacks work too
Hope I helped you :)

Thanks for the feedback,

Will definitely work on the spacing

I am using bootstrap for the buttons? Would you just suggest making it bigger?

Aye I did notice that so that has been changed, do you think I should change the way the navigation looks?

What do you think I should do with the progress bar?

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doubleF says

Sure, make your buttons bigger (.btn-large), about the navigation, yes because 3 times you repeat the navigation in the HTML , see about fixed position (position: fixed). Then for the progress bar, starts from that of the Bootstrap and customize :) (Example, in my item -> http://themeforest.net/item/jday-coming-soon-page/full_screen_preview/2687823 I start with that of Bootstrap and I changed the color -> easy :) ) I give you just some ways but you just have to be original and respect the fundamentals ;)

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BenSheppard says

Sure, make your buttons bigger (.btn-large), about the navigation, yes because 3 times you repeat the navigation in the HTML , see about fixed position (position: fixed). Then for the progress bar, starts from that of the Bootstrap and customize :) (Example, in my item -> http://themeforest.net/item/jday-coming-soon-page/full_screen_preview/2687823 I start with that of Bootstrap and I changed the color -> easy :) ) I give you just some ways but you just have to be original and respect the fundamentals ;)

Will do!! The progress bar changes with the colour profile you can choose on the left side I guess so!

Cheers!

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