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Pancha
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The one of the reasons given:

3) Overall the template is a good design but doesn’t offer enough content options or stand out enough aesthetically to meet our criteria. You might consider including an elements overview page with all the content styles or using more content style options through the different pages.

I don’t really understand that part: You might consider including an elements overview page with all the content styles or using more content style options through the different pages.

I don’t really get it, what should I do? Demo is here: http://obemania.com/site/

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kevinsturf
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the person means add more elements to your page. If it’s limited to some like just regular tags ans basic styling then you should add more. also, the site has so little content and text are too tiny and crunched together, I shoould consider fixing this.

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I’ve made a more place and added a gallery plus lightbox effect, what do you think? Is there a chance that it won’t be rejected now?

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shae
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i dont want to be a jerk, but it seems pretty out dated style wise?

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joestrong
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Adding a lightbox won’t fix the design. Everything is a bit cramped in in some places and too empty in others; try finding the balance in between. You might want to try changing the font size and leading.

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