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envp
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Hi everyone, i have made theme, and it was rejected. So i decided not to sell it, but give it free for download. Next, I decided to make second – new theme, after read some post on this forums, check top rated themes i decided to write own dedicated slider and after many hours of work new theme called alice raised. But bad thing happend – it was rejected (hard rejected). I know, i’m not best designer and I need some help, any sugestions will be helpful for me. Now I’m reading about typography, spacing. I need to improve it in my template. Would You give me some advice about it?

Please, take a look at theme and tell – what you think about it.

Here is a link:

http://sheepinthebox.com/alice2/

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The_Silverman
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You wrote the slider code? It’s quite nice. You definitely have some more work to do, but you look like a good coder.

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envp
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Yes, I wrote it, and it will be for free even form commercial use. It’s specyfic, because it use only CSS to describe effect and it works in all major browser.

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dnp_theme
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I usually review people here on the starting point but to get my hands on your slider and play a bit I am going to provide a more detailed review for you, what do you say :)

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envp
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Yes of course, but wait a moment, while i submit improved theme :)

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dnp_theme
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Yes of course, but wait a moment, while i submit improved theme :)

You can reply to my mail if you want your theme approved, I can help, we can talk private :)

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Anps
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Basically, you have problems with spacing and alignment, do not use justify, watch your spacings vertical and horizontal and the footer is a bit plain

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Basically, you have problems with spacing and alignment, do not use justify, watch your spacings vertical and horizontal and the footer is a bit plain

Congrats for getting Featured :)

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Basically, you have problems with spacing and alignment, do not use justify, watch your spacings vertical and horizontal and the footer is a bit plain
Congrats for getting Featured :)

Thanks mate

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Hi everyone, Just to let you all know that unfortunately the theme above is copied and that the self-coded, custom slider that was written by this guy is unfortunately not original and was copied from humaan.com.au. I’m all for people trying to create themes to sell on TF but when it’s basically copying someone else’s hard work and claiming it as your own it’s going a bit far. Cheers all.

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