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Festus911
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Hello,

My OpenCart template has being rejected several times, I had tried improving anything I can, but still is not enough, I need some feedback from you.

Rejected preview: http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/5065/dc01.jpg

Current Preview: http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5618/dc02.jpg

Demo: http://op.spthemes.us/

Thank you,

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iamthwee
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Get rid of that logo! It’s terrible.

Other than that the header is good. The slider is OK, images could be improved.

The featured section is just a grid, nothing great there.

Slider at the bottom, the orman clark arrow need to at least be displayed properly.

Footer needs heavy styling.

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Festus911
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Get rid of that logo! It’s terrible.

Other than that the header is good. The slider is OK, images could be improved.

The featured section is just a grid, nothing great there.

Slider at the bottom, the orman clark arrow need to at least be displayed properly.

Footer needs heavy styling.

Thanks, I will try to improve those listed things

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iamthwee
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Some stuff to work on. Hope that helps.

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Festus911
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I fixed most of what I could, but it was rejected. Feedback from reviewer: “The submitted template is just too generic and basic. Further, the overall design and aesthetic quality are not ready for ThemeForest. It is more like a restyled of the default theme with just minimum changes.

The chances to get it approved is pretty low, judge from the provided quality.”

Rejected Preview: http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5936/darkar.jpg

Current Preview: http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/2505/darkeri.jpg

Live Preview Updated: http://op.spthemes.us/

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iamthwee
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I actually like your new live version a lot.

I’ll post some more critique later if I have a chance but if not it will be after the weekend.

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FreshCreations
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You should turn that noise in the middle content background a bit down, seems a bit off for me.

Also the footer should have some more attention its to “empty” it has no body.

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