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satoridesign says

Hi everyone!

I’d be extremely grateful for constructive criticism of my theme draft, Origami: http://satoristudio.net/origami/. Got the same short message (“improvements needed”) from my reviewer twice, without any detailed explanations, thus a bit lost :)

Thanks!

Sincerely, Andrew.

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BenSheppard says

The typography is very hard to read.
It all just seems a bit rushed

Also, post in Item Discussion, read the Forum Rules

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satoridesign says

Thanks Ben!

I’d like to clarify – did you have the sidebar typography in mind – or the main content as well? By “rushed” you mean that the item looks like there’s not enough attention to details – or something else entirely? :)

Also – do you know if there’s a way for me to manually move this thread into the “Item Discussion” section or should I wait for the moderators to do it?

Best, Andrew

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sevenspark Moderator says

Moved to Item Discussion :)

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satoridesign says

Thanks Sevenspark!

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2Fwebd says

Hi satoridesign ! Nice style ! Just, I think the logo will be better at the left because actualy the the left empty area looks weird :)
Just my opinion ;), Regards

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satoridesign says

Hi satoridesign ! Nice style ! Just, I think the logo will be better at the left because actualy the the left empty area looks weird :)

Thanks F²! I also had a suspicion that the right-hand side center of gravity may not be the most convenient one :) Maybe you have any suggestions what to place on the right-hand-side instead of the logo then? Or maybe move the entire menu to the left?

Best, Andrew

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2Fwebd says

Put your social icons at the right with the menu ;) Actualy your menu is not really aligned :p I think you have to move the menu to the right but with a float right. Move you social icons just above your menu. Then align your logo at the left :)

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satoridesign says

Thank you for the idea F², I’ll definitely try this out ;)

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