Theme rejected - would appreciate criticism.

Hi everyone!

I’d be extremely grateful for constructive criticism of my theme draft, Origami: http://satoristudio.net/origami/. Got the same short message (“improvements needed”) from my reviewer twice, without any detailed explanations, thus a bit lost

Thanks!

Sincerely, Andrew.

The typography is very hard to read.
It all just seems a bit rushed

Also, post in Item Discussion, read the Forum Rules

Thanks Ben!

I’d like to clarify – did you have the sidebar typography in mind – or the main content as well? By “rushed” you mean that the item looks like there’s not enough attention to details – or something else entirely?

Also – do you know if there’s a way for me to manually move this thread into the “Item Discussion” section or should I wait for the moderators to do it?

Best, Andrew

Moved to Item Discussion

Thanks Sevenspark!

Hi satoridesign ! Nice style ! Just, I think the logo will be better at the left because actualy the the left empty area looks weird
Just my opinion , Regards
F²

doubleF said
Hi satoridesign ! Nice style ! Just, I think the logo will be better at the left because actualy the the left empty area looks weird

Thanks F²! I also had a suspicion that the right-hand side center of gravity may not be the most convenient one Maybe you have any suggestions what to place on the right-hand-side instead of the logo then? Or maybe move the entire menu to the left?

Best, Andrew

Put your social icons at the right with the menu Actualy your menu is not really aligned I think you have to move the menu to the right but with a float right. Move you social icons just above your menu. Then align your logo at the left

Thank you for the idea F², I’ll definitely try this out

A.