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this template get rejected, is any feedback to improve it?

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m-elgendy says

hello.

i get rejected this theme for psd template category, as usually ( your theme not ready yet for psd template, make some improvement and send again ) i’m sure all of you know this message :)

and i don’t know what exactly need to improvement on this theme.

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/853/01homepage1.jpg/

thanks in advance for your feedback

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BenSheppard says

This is definitely one of the better rejected themes, I’d personally say the biggest issue is the spacing, everything is so squashed together!

Work on the spacing a lot more and submit with a message asking for feedback!

Hope this helps!
BenSheppard

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silver530 says

Typographical improvements will be good choice and also improve the footer appearance and try to remove border radius of the boxes.

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m-elgendy says

thanks for feedback there’s any something else ?

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infuse01 says

Hi,

actually it looks pretty nice. I like your choice of colors. But as Ben and Silver already pointed out you would probably do better when you work on typography and spacings.

I put together a image which describes this a bit better: http://d.pr/i/aH3n

Good Luck with it.

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m-elgendy says

wow, you are amazing “infuse01” thank you very much really for your help i really appreciated it.

any other advice :) ?

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infuse01 says

wow, you are amazing “infuse01” thank you very much really for your help i really appreciated it. and other advice :) ?

afwan habibi :)

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m-elgendy says

i’ve check your profile, you are European, what about that man ? :)

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Decneo says
“infuse01”

you will get the forum star soon :)

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m-elgendy says

Decneo, do you have any advice for me?

thank you :)

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