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infuse01 says

@m-elgendi originated from egypt ;-)

@decneo finally someone paying attention haha

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m-elgendy says

that’s Cool, that’s nice to meet you :)

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m-elgendy says
hey @infuse01 what’s up. I made some changes for design, I took your advices
  • 1- fix spacing
  • 2- fix fonts
  • 3- some effects on buttons
  • 4- make big button font some bolder
  • 5- makes background a little bit more clean
  • 6- hover for latest news items
take a look http://d.pr/i/PCkU

do you think it’s ready ?

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infuse01 says

hey dude :)

yeah it looks better now but there is still a problem with the line-height. For example in section “service” you have about 4 lines of text. Those 4 lines are too close to each other – you need to increase the margin between them. Another thing are “variations”. I don’t know if you thought about or maybe you’re already working on it but do you have also the same design showing just a sample text page? I’m not quite sure but as far as I know the most PSD Templates coming with about 5, 6 or more different layouts in the same style.

But as soon as you have fixed that line-height problem (margin) you can definitely try to upload it again. If it gets rejected again I would recommend to still refine it on that parts I and the others mentioned and additionally create some more variations.

I really hope that helps you.

Good Luck and if you need anything just drop me a line ;)

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m-elgendy says

Thank you very much for helping me. I will try to improve line-height and apply all edit to other pages ( blog – about – service – blog – post blog page – contact – error page – portfolio )

and upload it again :)

thanks so much man

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SnoopyIndustries says

Hi mate,

I’m no expert, just trying to give you my thoughts. As the ones above specified, bigger line-heights for one. Attention to details is important, make the blog posts start with a capital letter(Bla bla bla…) Footer looks great, quite a bit more padding to blog and bigger font perhaps and more padding to our services text.

Hope it gets accepted, give me an email when it does.

Cheers

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