Typography

This is my first ever submission to TF and I got a soft rejection (I knew this would happen so I’m not upset about it) but the reason was “Overall template typography needs additional refinements” I’m not really sure what they mean by this so I figured I would ask here and see what you guys thought here is the screen shot of the design http://2.s3.envato.com/files/35929226/preview/screenshot_1.png Everyones feedback and time is much appreciated!

Line height and padding around the element the text is in. Too close to the edge makes it hard to read, give it breathing room. Label text is too close the inputs/textarea. Create more whitespace.

Read this: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/general/10-tips-for-creating-higher-selling-themes-at-themeforest/

itsmattadams said
Line height and padding around the element the text is in. Too close to the edge makes it hard to read, give it breathing room. Label text is too close the inputs/textarea. Create more whitespace. Read this: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/general/10-tips-for-creating-higher-selling-themes-at-themeforest/

First let me thank you for your reply! .

Also I fixed what you recommended do you think this looks better? http://i.imgur.com/6mFJI.png

Thanks in advance.