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HusO_o says

Hey guys, my first theme has been rejected. Can you quickly check it and tell me what i am not doing correctly ?

Here is the rewiew:

1. Your file has some well done design concepts, however it does not meet the current and very stringent quality guidelines and we can not accept your file at this time. You will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography, graphics and spacing.

2. There are a few inconsistent spacing issues throughout the design.

3. Overall template’s typography needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for sale.

4. Even with the current design, a significant increase in the polish of the various aspects of the template may just swing the decision in your favor.

Here the demo link: Demo link

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htmgarcia says

Nice design!

I recommend you don’t animate too much the images on the left. Is nice, but they move so fast and distract very much.

Good luck!

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BenSheppard says

Like the review says typography, you have to be able to easily read everything and the animating is a bit distracting

Aside from that, good looking template!

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doubleF says

Hi ! Increases the size of the font, because at this time the text isn’t readable :p Otherwise, it looks well :)
Just my opinion, hope it will help you
Regards,

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HusO_o says

I will do it, thank you very much guys !

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