Looks like a good start. Just a start for now.
You need to work on fonts sizes and weight, font pairing and visual hierarchy. Everything is just too bold and too squished everywhere. It needs a lot of work.
honestly doubt this will be accepted. it just doesn’t have enough identity. the colors seem a little random, content is replicated (everything is very basic boxes – no icons, or visual hooks) and the logo font is pretty nasty. just ask yourself “would i buy this?”.
the structure is good, just work on the visual elements.