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girlscancode says

Hi Guys,
I’m still new on ThemeForest, still trying to understand what clients want and what they don’t, therefore I really need your opinion about the new design I am about to submit. Only the Homepage is ready for now, but I need a fresh pair of eyes to look at it, as I usually can’t think anymore after too many hours spent on a single design
So what do you think? Is this Themeforest material?
http://tinyurl.com/cvokqj5
Best,
Gabriela

P.S. Please ignore spelling mistakes in the template :D

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2Fwebd says
Hi girlscancode !
Very Clean and beautiful ! Perfect for HTML category ;) (just: social icon in header looks very weird…remove them and put them in the footer -> more clean)
My personal opinion about:
still trying to understand what clients want and what they don’t
The more you will be original the luckier you will be ! :p Best regards
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htmgarcia says

I like! Looks so professional. I recommend you give more spacing in general; some elements can’t breath.

By the way, nice nickname!

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girlscancode says

Hi girlscancode !
Very Clean and beautiful ! Perfect for HTML category ;) (just: social icon in header looks very weird…remove them and put them in the footer -> more clean)
My personal opinion about:
still trying to understand what clients want and what they don’t
The more you will be original the luckier you will be ! :p Best regards
Thanks for your opinion FF, I think you’re right about the social icons! Sometimes is so difficult to look with objective eyes at our own creations :D As for your opinion about originality, I must disagree :)) There are on this marketplace some very very original templates that barely have any sales. Usually originality is for custom client made designs, while on a general marketplace like this you must be careful to not shock the client too much :D
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girlscancode says

I like! Looks so professional. I recommend you give more spacing in general; some elements can’t breath. By the way, nice nickname!
Hi Valentín, thank you for your opinion, I think you too are right about the space, I will try to let it breathe more :D
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Theme-Titans says

Hey i like your design looks cool and premium, From my point of view i think you need some padding on the left and right main container.

also the
the adaptive design that varies dependeing on your device
the dark container’s padding does not look even, padding on the bottom is bigger than the top of that label.

Best of luck i hope you get it into the marketplace.

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EugeneBakulin says
So what do you think?
Gabriela, I think that you have a nice smile. And regarding the design – it seems to be very themeforest-like – almost sure that it will be accepted. I’d think about changing next things
  1. the slider title – more background to the right (add padding) and make font bolder
  2. icons – make inner shadow not so dark
  3. footer – check out other items on themeforest – maybe you’d like to use some common widgets
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silver530 says

Very good but social icons should be in the footer for best user experience.

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