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SimonIJ says

Hello all,

i wanna ask you what i can do to improve this template because i have try to upload it 5 or 6 times and i get same message

This template has a nice concept going but it is not aesthetic ready for PSD category. It will need many improvements in typography, visual hierarchy, layout and general aesthetics. You might consider taking a look at some of our most popular items to get an idea for what we’re looking for or ideas to help improve your template.

Here is my 1 version

http://ziimx.zeekoo.dk/PhoorVersion1.jpg

Here is my 2 version

http://ziimx.zeekoo.dk/phoorTemplate.jpg

why do you think i get the same message?, i have fix the typography

Thanks for your time

Best regards Simon Jensen

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Dark_Knight says

I’m no expert, but the most obvious problem is the content section – grey on another light shade of grey/white makes it very difficult to read.

Also the logo is very obviously a rip of the envato .tutsplus one – don’t know if this would contribute to your template being rejected.

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webdesigndeluxe says

I agree, make the text black at least. Still needs a lot of work. Good luck :)

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SimonIJ says

Thx for your time :),

do you think this is okay :)?

http://ziimx.zeekoo.dk/phoor_version3.jpg

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chack says

The padding of the Heading is a lot to high. Also this comment picture is very small…

And add a footer ;)

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CreativeMilk says

Hello Simon, here’s some feedback from me:

- try to use english text(or lorem ipsum)
- set the color to a black or dark color
- use a lineheight between 18 till 22px
- use more paddig/margin around the elements(like 10 or 20 px)
- and a footer is very important so add a footer

if you have dont this please re-submit your file

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fuelthemes says

I would also suggest that you fix the padding of the sidebars. The top padding is far less than the right and left padding values.

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SimonIJ says

here is the new version

http://ziimx.zeekoo.dk/phoor_version4.jpg

i have fix: danish to english the color is more black (dark) lineheight is 21px in the content more padding in the content a footer have been add

Turkhitbox, i think if i set padding on the sidebars headline the content headline whuld have to get more padding on the top so it flow with the side bars headlines.

hope you understand my english :D im not the best to english

thanks for your help and time to help me :)

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