Which one is better ?

my themes got rejected many times because typography issues, so I need to know which factors TF reviewer looks for to decide whether the typography is good or bad, please answer those questions to help me pay attention next time I design a theme, Which one is better ? – Which one have more chance to get accepted?

(1)
http://themes.a-salah.com/kalabala

(2)
http://themes.a-salah.com/kalabalab/

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None. The concept seems to have a good start but it’s a start, as features seems fine to me, the design is still at the beginning.

Good luck.

dnp_theme said
None. The concept seems to have a good start but it’s a start, as features seems fine to me, the design is still at the beginning. Good luck.

Thanks, but you didn’t answer my question, which one is better in the typography side, font sizes and font ? 1 or 2 ?

I think you first template is better than the second template.

I like much more the second template. But design is weak. Work at design first.