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CreativeSpeed
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guys, i am Re-designing my theme after it’s rejected, i need your opinion on which one i go with

A – OR – B

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PaddyTaylor
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I’d say B but with respect as it is (of course you could be adding more) either way it looks far too simple and will need quite a bit of work to get accepted.

.Check you typography, spacing, colours, spelling, add social icons and some form of features to make it stand out.

Good luck

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CreativeSpeed
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I’d say B but with respect as it is (of course you could be adding more) either way it looks far too simple and will need quite a bit of work to get accepted.

.Check you typography, spacing, colours, spelling, add social icons and some form of features to make it stand out.

Good luck
Thanks taylor i will improve it, :)
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EmpiricalThemes
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I agree with Paddy, but why not use the blue for the actual shapes instead of that bright yellow? You can even add a subtle version of that pattern on the shape!

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CreativeSpeed
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I agree with Paddy, but why not use the blue for the actual shapes instead of that bright yellow? You can even add a subtle version of that pattern on the shape!

thanks for the Hint, this is part of a wordpress theme with more then one color scheme and yellow is important one, i try to fix the yellow brightness, but you really gave me in idea, i post here after i finish :)

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