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danielartro says

I don’t want to lose 12 days waiting so in just curious if these flyers will be approved or what can i do to improve them

Thank you for your help:)

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Amrhamza says

the second one there is a big huge fat ass chance to go under soft rejection

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danielartro says

what do you mean ? what should i change ?

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Amrhamza says

you don’t need to change any thing in the layout, you need to upscale it, refine it , work more the shadows make it more detailed, look at what other designers on the market doing

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LuisFaus says

you don’t need to change any thing in the layout, you need to upscale it, refine it , work more the shadows make it more detailed, look at what other designers on the market doing

I completely agree, the first one though needs a lot of work.

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danielartro says

The first one needs a lot work ? at what design or fonts ?because i really like the design .

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SomethingDesign says

La primul: 1. Compozitia e banala uite http://bit.ly/USjMvM incerca ceva mai dinamic 2. Ai lipit sigla de marginea de sus si ii vine si peste cap tipei lasa mai mult loc si ai grija la detalii 3. Fonturile nu prea se potrivesc uite aici fonturi care se potrivesc http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/typography-articles/a-beginners-guide-to-pairing-fonts/ 4. Scrie cu un font mai mic

La al doilea: 1. La fel compozitie banala incearca ceva mai creativ 2. Nu mai lipii titlurile si siglele de margine 3. Lumina si umbra la ceas sunt gresite (compara cu prezentarile la ceasuri de lux, sunt o groaza pe net) 4. Umbra la stikere e la rezolutie mica si se vede urat 5. Fonturile la fel ca la primul

Ai mare grija la detalii, alinieri, rezolutie

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Cre8tiveCloud says

The English Version:

First: 1. Composition is trivial http://bit.ly/USjMvM try something more dynamic look 2. You pasted the logo from the top and he comes over head chick leaves more room and watch the details 3. Font does not really fit here’s fonts that match http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/typography-articles/a-beginners-guide-to-pairing-fonts/ 4. Write with a smaller font The second: 1. Just try something more creative trivial composition 2. No titles and logos edge glued 3. Light and shadow are wrong watch (compare with presentations at luxury watches are a lot on the net) 4. Shadow the stickers is lower resolution and see ugly 5. Fonts as the first Take good care of the details, alignment, resolution

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La primul: 1. Compozitia e banala uite http://bit.ly/USjMvM incerca ceva mai dinamic 2. Ai lipit sigla de marginea de sus si ii vine si peste cap tipei lasa mai mult loc si ai grija la detalii 3. Fonturile nu prea se potrivesc uite aici fonturi care se potrivesc http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/typography-articles/a-beginners-guide-to-pairing-fonts/ 4. Scrie cu un font mai mic

La al doilea: 1. La fel compozitie banala incearca ceva mai creativ 2. Nu mai lipii titlurile si siglele de margine 3. Lumina si umbra la ceas sunt gresite (compara cu prezentarile la ceasuri de lux, sunt o groaza pe net) 4. Umbra la stikere e la rezolutie mica si se vede urat 5. Fonturile la fel ca la primul

Ai mare grija la detalii, alinieri, rezolutie
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danielartro says

I got a soft rejection on the second flyer and i don’t know why

Reviewers first message :You have text that is too close to graphic items on the page. Consider adjusting the point size of your fonts to lay them out with a little bit of breathing room around them. Also, ‘products’ is misspelled. :)

See if you can organize your layers to be a bit more organized for the end-user to navigate around. As it is, there are graphic elements that are in separate locations that could be grouped together to further clean up the layers.

And the second one :The first reviewer offered a few ideas of what could improve the file here. Unfortunately you failed to take the rejection into consideration making very small changed to the flyer. The flyer design here needs to be worked on much more and improved.

The current submission being the same as with the previous rejected one by Jeremy does not provide any improvements whatsoever leaving much more space for more work here.

Again think of working on the flyer concept some more, clean up the design, organize the elements and typography layout better.

Take the flyer out of the confort zone and provide a much more unique design.

What is wrong with this idea ? What can i do ?

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Amrhamza says

my best advice for you is to go to themeforest and get new ideas

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