Unfortunately, I don’t think it will be accepted because it looks quite dated. Also, the divs below the slider need to be wider. They do not align with the width of the slider at the moment. I would suggest you to use 960 grid to create your layout.
So the quality is not high enough? what did you ment by quite dated? like old? i have seen some hosting layouts in the hosting layout section which is why i thougth i had a pretty good chance also it has more pages