hey , i see that its ur first theme and i think that its not ready for tf , here a litle inspection IMHO ..
- first impression the background image looks outdated
- boxes are widely separated
- ur theme its called psytrance , why there is an chocolate image ? and slider below?
- mark the subject of your template before doing .. what template have to represent ?
- why social icons are repeated in the main picture and a footer? anyway, are too much
- I think you need to get sidebar to the end .. otherwise empty space is much
- slider needs more styles and less content (i think its much text)
- the design its opaque u need to combine other colors ..
Hope this helps ..