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patisss says

Hello,

I would love to hear some suggestions from you for my first landing page – http://patiss-themes.com/malachite/ .

It’s not yet finished, need to create gallery&footer and add smooth scrolling.

But what do you think, would it had a chance of getting accepted? If there is something wrong, could you please point it out?

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LoveThemes says

Spacing and typography are waaay off, and it just looks totally unfinished.

-Scott

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patisss says

Hey Scott,

Thank you for your feedback, I just want to let you know that I really appreciate that!

Took a look on Typography and changed it.

About spacing, could you please provide me some more detailed information, which places exactly have problems with spacing?

About finishing, okay, gonna finish the last two parts of website, and then post again.

Still, will really appreciate for your information on spacing issue.

Best regards,

Patisss

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patisss says

Hey,

Just updated it to full version, now only polishing.

Have tested it on -

Safari – Working,

Chrome – Working,

Opera – Working,

Firefox – Working

IE 9 , IE 8, IE 7 – working (small glitch on IE versions with image borders outlines, but gonna fix that ).

Hope for some suggestions and critics.

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patisss says

Bump :)

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patisss says

Up

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kungfu-themes says

Hi Patiss,

I would just like to leave my humble opinion. As a landing page it seems not very together. The pictures looks quite random and you haven’t really styled it well at all.

The front slider you are using is the well known parallex slider have you bought a developer license for this?

So work on your typography and creating a template which doesn’t look so mismatched.

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Nitro_Themes says

Hey Patisss

Well to tell you the truth it looks too plain, the images are cheesey there is not a lot going on. Try to make it stand out more maybe use different colors have a better font choice. The only thing that i like is the slider but the rest of the page looks un finished.

Cheers

Lester

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patisss says

Hey,

Thanks for your honest oppinion. Gonna work on it :)!

Patisss

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