Wow!! It’s really much much better!! Completely different and now you really showed a real PSD template. Congrats! But of course, as charlie said, keep having some improvements, not problems like it had.Going back on what you said:
When I open this old template now, I saw many errors and now it was clear for me why I god reject.That’s what I said to you (more or less, I tried at least):
But I think your problem might be that you still have no idea of the difference in quality between your template and the other from this site: try to see it.
I said because it happen with me a lot. Surely (I think) it happen with everybody.
Still hungry, still trying see it. haha
Drive_Alienn, about templates posted by charlie4282, the structure may be similar, but the design and style is totally different. Must also admit that this site is already well saturated with different concepts, but they are small details that make your product be unique/different, what matters is to make the best possible product that will attract site visitors, and moderates of Envato are very strict for you to become the best in your area. Still has many things that I believe you do not know, for example read the series about design on Tuts +: < http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/series > Have many things there!!
About the shadows, in fact I also see no problems, but the way it was put was not very good, continue testing new ideas, erase and start again. For me it happens direct, even more when I get a long time without creating any design, “delay” until back the inspiration. But I think your problem might be that you still have no idea of the difference in quality between your template and the other from this site: try to see it.
Hope this helps.
I liked, but have many things to improve yet and, unfortunately, you probably will get rejected. However, your “concept of design” is very good, need only some update about techniques and features: try a wider grid (if you are using grids) and learn more about the theories. Another point is that you have more chances in the HTML and WordPress category, don’t try PSD, the template have to be very beautiful and almost perfect. A tip to learn more about designing templates is buy one here and try to recreate/copy (just for learning purposes). Of course you can’t sell your version of the template, but it’s good to understand better how things work.
That’s all! Sorry for my english and good lucky!
Really really thanks for your attention!
Position the image and the gallery was a little bit bad in my grid, check out: https://redpen.io/rgwkjn
I have some other good ideas for the header and I will think better about the footer.
Do you think that the text of the posts is bad for reading?
Thanks a lot!
Thanks a lot for the replies until now! charlie4282, I saw now some design errors in the aligment and I don’t know what better about the spaces, I’ll study more about it. With respect to the footer and header, what I could better? Is it too clean?
smithy6300, I don’t understood the “lappy lol” (sorry for my poor english). But you are saying about the layout be too large, isn’t it? It’s because some contents overflow the wrap and I have some other reasons. About the typography, I’ll also study more.
Check out here: https://redpen.io/c7v394
The initial purpose of the theme is to be for WP, but it will have so many PSD Files and I am doing with a lot of details. The second observation is that the template does not allow light images, it’s a bad thing? Well, anyway, what do you think?
I quite liked, but I have some suggestions:
- Give more space for elements, I end up getting breathless with all the content together.
- Improve the typography
I liked it, but I think you should improve the consistency of the overall design. I’m no professional, but I already know that these are basic design problems.
I think if you send the theme without this changes you will get a “soft reject” (that’s not bad), but I don’t know, this reviewers are crazy..
That’s my opinion! Good Lucky! And… sorry for my poor english.
This is very strange, because the layout mixed color magenta with black, instead of green. I tested on “browsershots” and the template appears normal in chrome for all operating systems. I really don’t understand what are happening, anyway thanks a lot!