Hello amazing themeforest community!
I’ve recently came up with a design and I’d like your feedback. I’d also like to one if there’s any chance after some improvements to be accepted in Themeforest.
I’m kind of new as this is my second intended-to-look-professional design xd, but I won’t ask you to be soft, I want to read as constructive as possible criticisms!!! Everything is appriciated
Here’s the Design at 80% view. Home Page
I think you stand a nice chance if you make this theme Responsive.
While you have a nice concept there’s nothing interesting with your menu (I don’t dislike it’s simplicity but there’s nothing unique with it), there are some spacing and typograpgy issues as well.
Improve your buttons, arrows, main area and generally the whole psd and code it in HTML , I’m pretty sure it will be accepted on this martketplace then.
It really looks “old” somehow. Try to give your site a more modern look.
I dont like the logo, the menu, the buttons.. the whole concept.
It does look informative with a lot of content but the design is kind of poor.. I like the structure you could use some more white space though.
What did the reviewer say?
Besides some improvements that could have been done I believe your theme was rejected because it looks like many of the themes here and lacks a unique touch on it.
Try to figure out how you can make it look more special.
Think about the main structure, colors, typography, menu, slider, footer.
Anyway, I like some parts of the site, you really can improve it and get it accepted, good luck!
I can spot some very bad and disturbing elements in your web.
You should change the “Learn More” blue buttons immediatelly.. they look like they came here from 90’s.
Your footer doesn’t look like a footer plus the “Copyright” text should have a different colour.. i can’t read it.
You should also redesign the product boxes.. I mean those big icons are okay(although on some the letter looks misplaced) but the text is awful.
“How we work” area should be redesigned as well. I don’t think you should just put any colours you come up with.. they should be balanced with the rest of the site and that red.. is not. The leafs are also bad.
That’s all for the Home page. I do think it can look great if you improve the stuff I mentioned above or even more.
Good luck, I hope I helped you.
I’m sorry alisher2012 but I don’t think this will be accepted as it is now.
It looks very unfinished. You have the default color on links, typography is not very good especially that on the left top. There’s no balance in colors and generally the structure of the site has nothing interesting plus there’s weird white space.. in some areas its much more than it should be and in other areas there isn’t any at all.
I hope that helps, good luck improving it!