Too simple and too low quality for separate product. Just Compare yourself with latest items in that category http://themeforest.net/category/site-templates/specialty-pages/under-construction . You should make something unique, not mediocre stuff with 20 minutes of coding. IMHO.
- Event thumbnails micro spacings
- “Latest Audios” section should have album images, otherwise it’s useless
- Add Placeholders
- Blog thumbnails haven’t actual post link
- Blog thumbnails micro spacings
- Lack of features
- Contact form might be handy
- Overall spacings and alignment
Just try to navigate with expanded menu. Also take some time to find placeholdres.
First of all find a better placeholders. Secondly do something with service thumbnails, they are terrible now to be hornest.
Well… Put yourself in customer shoes. Thay want unqie but customzible template. Try to add extra homepage layouts, portfolio styles and more sensable page layouts like services, about us, team etc. That not a big deal and easy to implement, but customers needs to see what they can do with your template.
P.S. No the worst first submission I saw so far. Mine was worse . If got rejection anyway don’t give up. Just take 2-3 marketplace free days and go over again with more experience and fresh look.