The padding looks better, your theme is starting to take shape, but it’s still missing something. Here is an old hospital site I worked on – http://bit.ly/H5ys1p. Not the best but a good inspiration for content and layout. Personally, I think your theme still needs a bit of contrast, although your main concept and idea is good it needs something to give it more life, more eye candy to attract attention.
The design maybe needs a bit of contrast and you might want to add a bit more left and right padding to the inner content. Good Luck!
Hey Mark Just want to say that I think your theme is awesome! I like the design and layout. Except for the fact that the reviewer stated that they have too many similar items, I think that this theme would’ve done good. Keep up the good work
The lower part is the second page, containing elements that go with the theme, I have changes a lot on the theme so far but far from finished.
In reply to your design, what I would personally change is the following: 1. The “Why us” section: the font is a bit to big, try making it a bit smaller and more visually appealing. 2. The icons and content in the footer is a bit to “bulky”. 3. You can maybe also use a light texture for the background. 4. The Feature slider’s image is a bit blurry for some reason. 5. Try using gradients that don’t blend in to deeply, ie: from bright orange to light orange in the web development box in the middle, thats a bit to dull. 6. The content on the page looks a bit squeezed to me, try giving some space to breath.
If you look at the design you should get that “wow” feeling.
Hope this helps?
It maybe needs a bit more finer detail and the typography can be a bit more neater.
I think it is way to too similar to many other themes. And from that point of view I don’t think it will be accepted. The screenshot is quite small so I can’t really comment any details. In any case, if there is a chance, it will be for WP category directly. Perhaps if you share more screens with bigger size you can get more feedback
Here is a better preview http://kobusswartz.co.za/preview.html
Thanks Takway, I only posted 2 pages, there’s about another 12 pages. it’s going to be an HTML theme with a bunch of features. I hope themeforest will approve and that the theme will do good. Thank you very much for your feedback!