First of all, don’t get down by rejection, just keep improving. I think overall it looks great, however you should really read up on typography. You have way to many different fonts and styles. It looks overwhelming for minimal design and they don’t go quite well together. Also, you have really big space issues. (this are the main two) You have to train space and typography. It takes time, but when you get it, you get it.
I think there is too much space on the sides. On the slider there is too much space between title and tagline. Slider navigation is weird, you should take of the arrows and leave the squares. Or else it’s not functional or comfortable. I don’t really like the background. You might want to change the display of partners.
This are just my two cents. Just play around with it and you’ll get it.
I am looking for a wordpress theme/framework for my personal project. I need something with simple one column layout, must be responsive (snappy), no admin menu with unnecessary stuff (e.g. add background, add anchor color), very minimal, well built and organized (no more than 3 stylesheets, few JS files that load in bottom ect.) and it should load fast.
Any suggestions? Thanks in advance!