I think you need a lot of work for this one before it can get approved(Sorry for being blunt). Try looking at the flyers around here and see their standard. I will try give some advices that might help:
1. Currently everything looks very flat even for the main text that has the layer style applied. Try giving it more depth. A lot of the flyers here has it. Try see how they do it. Look up some layer style tutorial online that uses depth.
2. Your design is somehow out of the box with its composition and layout. That is good but until it carries a sense of balance, your design will look out of place and not aesthetically pleasing. Hence, the easy way out is to keep everything centralize. You can never go wrong with that.
3. I will say if you are designing a portion for the buyer to place the photo. Put the photo in so that they have a sense of how it looks. Don’t put the word ‘photo’ there.
4. I am never a fan of warped text especially in a 2D design. Most of the time, it never looks good because it creates an imbalance to the design. I will say do away with that. Keep your text as it is.
In short, look at other flyers here and analyze them. Understand why they look good and you can learn from there. All the best.PS: Sorry for my bad english.
Oh thank you for your frankness, is precisely what I look for, I am aware that even missing a lot of work here, thank you very much for your feedback, I will continue working to improve, following his advice, greetings.
I received a rejection on Graphic River has been one of my first attempts on the platform and I want feedback from people with more experience than me, and so help me improve, not to improve the same design, but to improve my level and perception thus achieve better future attempts.
I would also like to know if there is a possibility correctly not update files that have been gently rejected, remaining hidden for editing? I ask the question because I had two corrections in this Flyr, for having added fonts without legitimacy, and even when I made I the correction on adding MyFont.com sources I again reiterated this matter, ignoring my update.
Greetings and thank you