It’s not looking bad.
Would you use it for your logo reveal? On your website, tv?
Feel like a camera behaves unstable in the end of video.
Feels like self promotion?
Hello, DarkNurbs! Nice start, but i think it will be rejected. Reason – not enought smoothnes camera movements. It looks great, but too flat. I see you use blur plugin (maybe fast or lens blur), it’s bad idea for 3d animation. Use DOF in camera options, it improve overall quality of video, also u need more animation in rotation & scale. IMO Sorry for my bad english & have a big sales. Best regards, Anton.