Hi guys, i’m new here and this is my first upload on the marketplace. I have good faith it won’t be rejected as i followed every rules. Can you tell? What’s your opinion. Any advice?http://s1295.photobucket.com/user/Lionel_Laboureur/media/imagepreview_zpsf40bc238.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0 http://s1295.photobucket.com/user/Lionel_Laboureur/media/01_preview1_zpseb94c241.jpg.html?sort=3&o=1
I’m afraid that’s heading for rejection….
It’s a nice idea, I would play up the Cuba theme of the event. But the typography especially isn’t professional enough standard yet. Especially the “your club your town.” I like the basic layout and idea of it, I just think it needs more work. Good luck!
Thanks for your reply and honesty. Yeah, deep inside i knew the half top was not good enough. When an item get hard rejected, is it possible to submit it again after improvement?
For info, the cuban flyer has been soft rejected. They said exactly what you said. Good one!!
nice design, but I think you need change other font “your club”, “your town” because see as basic and other noise see too strong, you can change alpha as 50% because alpha 100% (photoshop) if black see ugly but I love your designs
I hope help you!
More than improving, i pretty much changed all of it. This is how it looks like. What do you think?
I like the colours. But for me the collage of images looks messy. Also I think the Cuban theme has been lost in the background. I think it would be better to put the theme across more strongly. The typography looks over crowded without enough spacing, and the distortion from the perspective effect doesn’t look good to me.
The layout of the original with the flag really worked quite well, it was more striking than the new version.
Well I hope that helps anyway…