Is it possible somebody can give feedback?
Its made in After Effects CS6 and No Plugins required.
It’s a start..but i’m pretty confident it wouldn’t get approved to the marketplace.
This idea has been done a million times already and your project isn’t bringing anything new to the table.The design and camera movements are very simple and unpolished.
Looks like you know some basics of After Effects,but i would suggest you keep learning more before starting to publish projects.