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TkayGraphics
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A a glance of my Portfolio template [ PSD ] I have sent it to be reviewed by themeforest staff.

http://i50.tinypic.com/hs9rbl.jpg

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snaz3d
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The text is way tooooooooooo big!

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Ivor
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I can read the future – this design will be rejected :P

Kidding :) – that need a lot of improvements mate.

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adam_robinson
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this has to be a joke seriously.

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kevinsturf
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I dont mean to sound bad here but I have to tell ya, that ain’t gonna get accepted as the way it is now. If you take a look ate some psds already here, you’ll see the standards required to get accepted into the PSD category.

You need A LOT of improvements, first with typography and work from there.

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duane_ashworth
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That really needs a lot of work , I’d say really the colors are the only thing going for it , Introduce some whitespace and yea, tone those titles down a lot, add some sections and some dummy text so that someone who would want to buy it has an idea of what the website would actually look like when coded.

Theres really not much interest in it , tone the menu down and make sure that you work out what people are going to focus on.

I don’t think this will be accepted , you really need to look more at what is currently for sale and focus on coming up to that standard.

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DDStudios
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Good thing you put some watermark .. I would have totally stole it :)

Sorry I couldn’t not say it :)

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TkayGraphics
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Thank you guys , it was m first rubish template.

I’m making a new one.

Any idea’s what improments i can make?

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finsta2
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Don’t use size 72+ text

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TkayGraphics
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Guys what about :

http://i50.tinypic.com/330hfef.jpg

I’m going to add colour lator.

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