The first impression: looks very nice!
The problem can be that is similar in the layout to another ones (very generic)
Good luck with improvements!
I think many shadow in theme is overuse.
Okay, I will tone down the shadows too! It seems that my shadows are causing much problems Thanks.
Honestly i would stick to the gray scale and get rid of that blue. Also found that it is not that unique, there are a lot of templates with the same layout and graphics. The hovers are nice but you have to add more interactive content or more animated content. Make it unique try to stay away from looking at other templates on TF.