This is the template: http://ongelom.altervista.org/ . I would like try to load this responsive template (not yet finished at all) on themeforest.net. Second you it could be accept? What should I improve?
You need some typo improvements, better color usage, perhaps some content improvements.
The first thing that jumps out to me is the color scheme. I think you should start out by changing the color scheme completely, and then go from there (there are other issues but that is the one that jumped out to me first).